[Leon]

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[A-MAN]

Gordon: Very nice!

Iczzy: His torso seems to extend forever. Perhaps bump the jacket from the middle for a separator between the trousers and the torso. You buffed him a little too much at the chest also.

Livermore: I don't know why, but the legs look like they're facing back; only when you see the upper body and the shoes do you realize he's actually facing the front. Perhaps it has something to do with how you shaded the trousers.

Denis: Nothing major I could spot.

Beautiful artworks you've done there! Keep this up!

[Leon]

Iczzy: His torso seems to extend forever. Perhaps bump the jacket from the middle for a separator between the trousers and the torso. You buffed him a little too much at the chest also.

Livermore: I don't know why, but the legs look like they're facing back; only when you see the upper body and the shoes do you realize he's actually facing the front. Perhaps it has something to do with how you shaded the trousers.

A-MAN,
To be honest, I really don't like that drawings. I need to work on body proportions. Surely, upcoming drawings will be better than this drawings.

[MangaD]

You are on the right track though. Everything starts with the art of imitation.
My tips:

• Read manga tutorials online (eg. link);
  
• Watch how to draw youtube videos (eg. link);
  
• Search DeviantArt for tutorials, the best are there.
  

Try to find a style that suits you, stick to that style, and keep on improving. ;)