04-12-2018, 10:03 PM
As someone who's done HF edits for years, and can be considered one of the best (currently the best because I'm alone :( ) I approve.
I see a lot of mistakes in this edit (which I will point out later), but I can see you're a beginner to this, and I'm guessing you used MS paint to make this. So don't take any of these personally, just improve upon them on the next time.
1) The angle of the blade does not match the angle of the shaft.
2) The character's left hand isn't holding the weapon, even though it looks like it should.
3) Skin color of the arms does not the skin color of the face
4) You didn't remove the bit of the pants from Eason's shirt that you used for the character.
5) The legs are placed too far to the left.
6) The character's shoes have no soles.
7) Legge's hair cuts out at the ends.
I see a lot of mistakes in this edit (which I will point out later), but I can see you're a beginner to this, and I'm guessing you used MS paint to make this. So don't take any of these personally, just improve upon them on the next time.
1) The angle of the blade does not match the angle of the shaft.
2) The character's left hand isn't holding the weapon, even though it looks like it should.
3) Skin color of the arms does not the skin color of the face
4) You didn't remove the bit of the pants from Eason's shirt that you used for the character.
5) The legs are placed too far to the left.
6) The character's shoes have no soles.
7) Legge's hair cuts out at the ends.
There ain't no rest for the wicked,
Until we close our eyes for good.