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[Story] Write a weird story
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For 3 billion years this creature amassed all the dark energy it could find and the light energy began surrounding the lair. Now it needed a place to rule over. So it set out in search of a prosperous land, taking all the dark energy with it. So the light energy rushed to take its place and began collating more and more. This light energy was waiting for its rightful possessors.
After searching for years and years, the creature found a planet named [insert a right name here]. On it there was much energy to harness. The creature started destruction and creating its own realm. It enslaved all the good ones and spread terror and fear everywhere. It was about time the higher powers had noticed. But it was too late. They created a prophecy and hoped it would fulfil itself, for this creature was now way beyond their control. And the years dragged on until the first rebel war came ...


Please improve this story :angel:

MangaD  edited this post 22-01-2016 10:12 PM because:

You can use [tab=x], where x is a number, to indent paragraphs. I used [tab=3].
You can refer to the creature as "it" instead of "he". Demon Lord shouldn't have any gender, know what I mean? Julian laugh
Instead of searching for a body to possess, what about materializing by feeding on living beings? :p Made a few changes to your script to correct a few things...

Evil can never be eradicated from the world..... But it can be kept at bay by fighting. So, always keep fighting..... never cease it  .  


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Write a weird story - by Bhargavmodak - 17-01-2016, 07:55 AM
RE: Write a wierd story - by MangaD - 17-01-2016, 04:03 PM
RE: Write a wierd story - by Bhargavmodak - 21-01-2016, 10:42 AM
RE: Write a wierd story - by MangaD - 30-01-2016, 01:04 PM
RE: Write a wierd story - by Pete P. - 30-10-2016, 08:26 PM
RE: Write a wierd story - by BlazingGale - 30-10-2016, 08:33 PM
RE: Write a wierd story - by MangaD - 30-10-2016, 09:01 PM
RE: Write a wierd story - by BlazingGale - 30-10-2016, 09:39 PM
RE: Write a weird story - by Bhargavmodak - 27-08-2017, 03:20 PM
RE: Write a weird story - by Bhargavmodak - 03-04-2019, 05:24 PM
RE: Write a weird story - by MangaD - 06-04-2019, 06:39 PM
RE: Write a wierd story - by BlazingGale - 30-10-2016, 08:07 PM

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